Hướng dẫn chi tiết cách viết mở bài và kết bài IELTS writing task II

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1. HOÀNG KIM SƠN

   May 29, 2023 at 4:27 pm

   Đề 1: Some people say that overeating is harmful and advertising for some food products should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

   There is a public debate that eating too much may have negative impact to human’ health and some food products, which have advertising should be banned. In my point of view, overeating bring terriable effect to body but food advertising should be allowed as well as other products.

   Overall, eating too much is never good for our health, therefore we should have balace die according to doctor advises instead of listening to advertising

   Đề 2: Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.　

   There is a public debate that with the supporting from the famous to international aid organizations, problems will drawed attention, otherwise, the other think that it only covers the important of the problems. From my point of view, both the good side or the draw back depend on how they process it.

   Overall, helping other is a humanity action, however there are hundred methods to do that so we should find the way bring most benifits to the local who are metting a difficult problem.

   Đề 3: Some people believe that rich countries provide poorer countries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

   There are some agree that wealth nations should help developing countries in other types of help rather than only provide money. From my point of view, money is necessary for helping the other, however, the percentage of money in their support package depend on the situation of the country get help.

   Overall, there are various ways to support the developing countries from richer nation such as sending money, technologies intruction, raw marterial. Therefore, choosing the suitable method depend a lot on both supported country and supportting country

   Đề 4: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?

   There is a public debate that most visiters of historical places such as museums and historycal sites are tourists but not the local people. Althought there are various resons for this happend, but to make there places to become attractive to local is not so easy.

   Overall, althought the history places is attractive to tourist but it is limited to the local, who understand about them well enought therefore to atract theo local to there place is difficult task.

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2. NGUYỄN NHẬT MINH

   May 29, 2023 at 4:28 pm

   Đề 1:
   Some people think that eating too much is harmful and social should ban some food products advertisements. In my view, I totally agree that overeating is not good for our health and some food products advertisements should be cut off.

   In conclusion, it is not good for us to eat too much. We should balance between eating and exercising to keep fit and stay healthy. Moreover, we shouldn’t buy bad products which were advertised on TV. It’s harmful for our health.

   Đề 2:
   Now there is a growing awareness that famous people whose support towards international aids organization draws attention to problems while other people say celebrities make the problems less inportant. In my point of view. In this essay, I will discuss both of these opinion and give my own idea

   In conclution, I’m the side of the idea of having famous people’s support towards international aids organization draws attention to problems.

   Đề 3:
   There is a public debate that wealth countries provide poorer nations with other types of help rather than giving money. I agree to this opinion and I will outline them in this essay.

   In conclution, I think that instead of giving money, rich nations should support other types of help such as food, clothes and technology in order not to waste too much money but also both nations will be happy.

   Đề 4:
   Recently the problem has been brought into focus is that tourists majorly visit many museums and historical sites instead of local people. There are a lot of reasons to explain this and we should do more to attract more local people. I will outline them in this essay.

   Overall, museums and historical sites are something not so attrative to local people. I think to make them concern about this sites need a lot of effort.

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3. LÊ XUÂN ANH

   May 29, 2023 at 4:28 pm

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   ĐỀ 1
   Opening : It is undoubtedly the case that the consumption of too much food is known to be harmful to people’s health as well as advertising for some food should be prohibited.I would argue that people should be eat in moderation instead of overeating food products
   Conclusion: In conclusion , although overeating is one of the most popular diets of some people , I strongly believe that our society should put a ban on the appearance of junk food and people should be on a balanced diet.

   ĐỀ 2:

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4. LÊ XUÂN ANH

   May 29, 2023 at 4:28 pm

   ĐỀ 2 :
   The question of whether famous people’s assistance for international aid organizations creates the observation to problems or the issues are made less essential. In this essay, I will discuss both views as well as giving my opinon.

   In conclusion, although some people say that famous people’s aid makes the problems unimportant , I strongly believe that celebrities bring for international aid organizations the attention to issues.

   ĐỀ 3 :
   The issue of whether developed countries bring different types of help rather than financial assistance to poorer nations . While some people think that it is suitable for rich countries to help poor countries increase their finance , I would argue that great nations should be highly benefical for unwealthy nations.

   In conclusion, although helping poor countries to improve their economy and finance has numerous merits, I strongly believe that developed nations offer types of help to poor-quality countries.

   Đề 4 :
   It is undoubtedly the case that numerous museums and cultural historical heritages are mostly gazed with veneration by visitors and not local people in recent years. While this trend has caused some issues, some of the ways that could be considered in addressing the problem.

   In conclusion, museums and historical sites can attract visitors but local people do not really pay their attention to them. To improve this situattion, people need to make an effort to bring for local people the interest from historical heritages and museums.

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5. NGUYỄN ĐÌNH HẢI

   May 29, 2023 at 4:29 pm

   1.It’s believe that eating too much food is really bad for the body and some food advertisement should be banned. I agree that people should eat enough to live instead of overeating.
   In conclusion, it’s really bad for us if we eat too much and we should do some exercise to get a healthy body. Not only that, we also shouldn’t buy the food from advertisement which is unhealthy
   2.There are two kind of people, one think that famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems while other think that celebrities make the problem less important. In my view, i think i will go on with my own opinion
   In conclusion, although there are still have some people say that famous people’s support international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, i still believe that celebrities make the problem less important
   3.It’s believe that rich countries provide poorer ones with other types of help rather than financial aid. I agree with it and i will go thought why i think that in my essay.
   In conclusion, i think that rich nations should provide some supply instead of money forr the poorer countries to not waste the money.
   4.There are a problem that most of the visits of many museums and historical sites are the tourist instead of local people. So why it happen and how to fix it, i will say about it in my essay.
   In conclusion, museums and historical sites can attract visitor but can’t make the local pay attention on them. So to improve it, may be it need to be maken an effort.

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6. TRANG LE

   May 29, 2023 at 4:32 pm

   Đề 1: Some people say that overeating is harmful and advertising for some food products should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

   It is generally believed that eating too much has a negative impact on people’s health, so advertising for some food products should be prohibited. I agree that overeating is harmful for our health, however, we should not ban advertising for food products.

   In conclusion, many people think that we should prohibit to advertise food because of the negative influence of overeating. However, I think we should treat food products equally with other products because there are plenty of food products that are really good for our health.

   Đề 2: Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.　

   It is widely believed that the supporting of celebrities towards international aid organizations helps to raise issues, while others think that the problems may become less important. From my point of view, both views have the merits and drawbacks depend on how the famous process it.

   Overall, raising problems to international organizations through celebrities can help it to be more attended, which depends on the way they make it.

   Đề 3: Some people believe that rich countries provide poorer countries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

   It is often said that wealth countries give poorer nations with other types of help rather than financial aid. I somewhat disagree with that.
   Overall, there are plenty of ways for wealthy nations to help other countries. However, using what types of help depends on what the poorer nations need and what rich countries can help.

   Đề 4: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?

   It is true that local people do not go to museums and historical places as regularly as visitors do. I think there are some main reasons for this phenomenon and some solutions should be done to reduce this difference.

   In conclusion, many historical places is attractive to tourists rather than to the local. Improving the situation requires a lot of efforts of different bodies.

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7. NGUYỄN THỊ THANH NGÂN

   May 29, 2023 at 4:32 pm

   Đề 1: Some people say that overeating is harmful and advertising for some food products should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
   Some people comment that eating too much is not good for health and some food product’s advertising should be prohibited.
   In my opinion, it is right that overeating is not good for health but we should not prohibit some advertising for food products.

   In conclusion, many people think that we should not ban some advertising because of the negative influence of overeating. However, I think that many advertisement of food product can provide useful information to choose a good product which good for our health.

   Đề 2: Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organization draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
   Some people trust that the support of famous people aims at international aid organization the attention to problem, while others think celebrities make the problem less crucially. In my essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinions.

   Overall, famous people are easy to influence, so they need to do benefit attention through international aid organization. On the contrast, they can make negative affect because of their non-professional working stype.

   Đề 3: Some people believe that rich countries provide poorer countries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
   Many people trust that wealth countries provide not only money but also other types of help to developing countries. I somewhat agree that developing countries have ability to help weak countries but in some cases they still need to receive the support from developing countries.

   Overall, each country have ability in each period of time. In some case the financial is not all. Therefore, we can keep the peace in over the world to can support together.

   Đề 4: Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?

   This essay discusses reasons that tourist often attend in many museum and historical sites and what local people interested in.

   Overall, museum and historical sites attractive to tourist but it is limited to the local people who think that they understood all and knew everything about home country.

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8. LÊ THỊ TUYẾT MAI

   May 29, 2023 at 4:33 pm

   Đề 1: Some people say that overeating is harmful and advertising for some food products should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
   These days, there are many people concerned about the fact that eating too much might causes harmful for human health. Whether advertising should be banned for some kinds of food or continue is still a controversial issue. A comprehensive analysis concerning this view and my own opinion will be fully discussed in this essay.
   In conclusion, overeating adversely affects either mental and physical health. Therefore, it is really necessary to follow doctors’ advice to reach a healthy balanced diet instead of dependence on advertisements.

   Đề 2: Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.　
   These days, there are a number of people who are concerned about the contribution of celebrities to international aid organizations. Whether it might draw attention or converts the importance of the problems. An analysis concerning two points of view and my opinion will be fully discussed in this essay.
   In conclusion, raising problems for international aid organizations through famous people can help it to be more attended, which should be careful on the way they process it.

   Đề 3: Some people believe that rich countries provide poorer countries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
   Whether wealth nations should help pour countries other needs besides providing money or not is still a controversial issue. A comprehensive analysis concerning the merits and demerits of this opinion and my point of view will be fully discussed in this essay.
   To conclude, there are numerous way to support poorer nations from richer, including sending money, technologies, raw material, etc. Therefore, it should be chosen by a suitable method which depends a lot on both supported and supporting countries.

   Đề 4: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is the case? What can be done to attract local people?
   There is a public debate that most visitors come to museums and historical places are tourists instead of local people. In this essay, a variety of reasons and possible measurements to attract local citizens will be fully outlined.
   In conclusion, there are a few distinct reasons why local people are not interested in museums and historical states. However, by looking at these reasons, we can find ways to convince them changing their mind.

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9. NGUYỄN NGỌC ANH THƯ

   May 29, 2023 at 4:33 pm

   Đề 1:
   Many people think that food’s advertisements should be banned since overeating could possess potential threats to human as much as smoking could. Personally, I disagree with this statement because smoking has no advantages while eating is the necessity of life.

   In conclusion, smoking damages people’s health in every way, its advertisements should definitely be banned, but it is unnecessity to ban the advertisements of food products because they only harm people when consumed it over demand.

   Đề 2:
   It is argued that famous people’s involvement in global aid organizations attracts the attention of the community. While some people suppose that their participation may downplay the significance of problems. In my opinion, I totally agree that this trend could bring about enormous and positive changes to society in some ways since we have the effect of celebrities despite all the argument.

   In sum, although involvement of superstars in global aid organizations will have some negative impacts on the society, I think that their action will bring better changes to our community.

   Đề 3:
   Nowadays it is usual that wealthy nations offer financial aid to their poorer counterparts, but unfortunately, this proves an ineffective method in the combat against poverty. Many people think that rich countries should offer other types of assistance rather than money. Personally, I totally agree with this statement since it is the way making more effective changes.

   I conclusion, I agree that financial aid is less effective than other types of assistance because of the unsustainable way government in poor country use.

   Đề 4:
   The fact is that historical places and museums attract a large number of tourists; however, local people show little interest in them. In my opinion, there are many reasons behind this trend and governments can take certain steps to encourage locals to visit.

   In sum, museums and historical places play a significant role in understanding the culture and the historical background in the particular country or are. Therefore, the local government should take certain measures to encourage local people to visit.

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10. TRAM NGUYEN

    May 29, 2023 at 4:33 pm

    Đề 1: Nowadays, people think that some food products’ advertisements should be banned due to harmful overeating and in my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement.
    In conclusion, to maintain healthy mental and physical health, people should follow suitable diets and doctor’s advice instead of looking at advertisements.

    Đề 2: These days, concerns about the contribution of celebrities to international aid organizations have been raised among people. They argue whether celebrities make the problem more or less important. In my point of view, I totally agree that celebrities make the problem less complicated.
    In conclusion, the impact of celebrities on global aid organizations helped a lot when they bring the community together.

    Đề 3: Recently, the problem has been brought into focus on whether wealthy countries should help poorer countries with other needs rather than financial. I somewhat agree that wealthier countries should help poorer countries in their ability.
    Overall, countries around the world can support each other within their ability and not only financially.

    Đề 4: Nowadays, there is a growing tendency that many museums and historical sites can only attract tourists but not local people. In this essay, I will discuss why is this happen and how to improve it.
    To sum up, museums and historical sites can only attract tourists instead of local people because they already have well-knowledge about that, therefore, attracting local people would be a difficult task.

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11. NGUYỄN THỊ HOÀI THU

    May 29, 2023 at 4:34 pm

    Đề 1: Many people subscribe to the idea that eating too much can cause harm to people’s health and therefore certain kinds of food should be banned from being advertised. I totally agree with the statement above.
    In conclusion, while many people may argue that it is harmless to overeat, I hold a firm belief that the amount of food consumed should remain at an appropriate level. In order to do that, any food products promoting people’s eating too much should not be advertised widely.

    Đề 2: It is commonly suggested that problems can grab more attention from the public if support towards international aid organizations is offered by celebrities. However, others argue that famous stars only undermine the importance of issues. In the passages below, I will elaborate both sides of the statement given and present my own idea.
    All in all, while adverse impacts of celebrities may be unavoidable in the process of solving the problem, it is true that public figures in many cases contribute a lot to alleviating bad situations.

    Đề 3: There is a common belief that developed countries should provide disadvantaged neighbours with other types of assistance instead of purely financial support. I somewhat concur with the idea and will display some reasons in the essay below.
    To sum up, although economy plays a vital role in every nation’s development, other aspects are also worth considering if wealthy nations desire to offer poorer ones efficient help.

    Đề 4: It is a fact that foreign tourists engage in museum and historical sites visiting activities than indigenes. Many reasons lying behind this phenomenon as well as ways to improve the situation will be elaborated in my essay.
    All things considered, even though many excuses for the local’s lack of interest in museums and historical sites can be given, there are a number of feasible measures to tackle the problem.

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12. NGUYEN THANH HUNG

    May 29, 2023 at 4:34 pm

    Đề 1: Some people said that we shouldn’t eat too much food because it’s harmful, we also should ban the advertising of some food products. I somewhat agree with their opinion and willing to show some of my arguments in this essay.
    In conclusion, i am side of the idea of overeating is so bad for our health but we shouldn’t stop the advertising of some food products because we may know about some really delicious foods.

    Đề 2: Some people has a belief about the influence of celebrities that they can draw the attention towards worldwide aid organizations, nevertheless others think famous people makes the problems become few important. In this essay, I will discuss both of these opinion and give my own idea.
    To sum up, i am side of the idea of celebrities can make people attend to international aid organiations. Moreover, i think famous people always has a big impact on the problems.

    Đề 3: Some people belived that poor countries may be provided by richer countries with many types of help instead of financial aid and associated. In this essay, I will outline some arguments that why i totally agree with this opinion.
    In conclusion, i think that wealth countries really give poorer countries many types of support rather than financial assistance. Moreover, i think it’s really useful for poor countries.

    Đề 4: Tourists have visited to many museums and historical sites in some countries, whereas local people have visited fewer. I think that there are various reasons for this, as well as a variety of things to attract local people.
    In conclusion, I think that many causes make local people go to the museums and historical sites fewer than the tourists. However, by looking for these reasons we can find some solutions to draw local people.

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13. NGUYỄN THU HÀ

    May 29, 2023 at 4:34 pm

    Đề 1:
    It is widely believed that eating too much would bring a large number of bad effects to our health and advertising some kinds of food should be prohibited consequently. In my own opinion, i totally disagree with this idea.
    In conclusion, even although we should not allow our intake over the appropriate level, it is not necessary to ban food advertising. In stead of that, we can have an appointment with nutritionist to have a suitable diet in order to make our health better.

    Đề 2:
    It is now a common belief that issues can attract more attention by being supported towards international aid organizations by famous people. Besides, some might think that celebrities just make the problems become unimportant. This essay discusses both views of the statement and indicates my own opinion.
    In short, even though the famous people might have some bad impact on solving the problems, i still believe in their important role in charitable activities.

    Đề 3:
    It is widely believe that developed countries should give assistance to poorer countries not only with financial aid but also with other types of one. In my own view, i totally concur with this idea.
    All in all, although the financial help is important, i think that wealthy countries should take different ways to support poor ones more effectively.

    Đề 4;
    Many nations have been faced with the problems that there is an ever-increasing number of visitors come to museums and heritage sites while local people do not. There are a great deal of reasons that lead to this phenomenon and also have some solutions to solve these problems. They will all be discussed in this essay below.
    In short, it is quite hard for those who do not have enough knowledge of the historical sites or museum to be attracted by them. Therefore, trying to make it widely is a good solution and it requires efforts from both individuals and the government.

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